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I'm in the 1st year student of Kumamoto University.
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I'm in the 1st year at Kumamoto University.


I have been playing the piano since I am 5years old.
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I have been playing the piano since I was 5years old.　（時制の一致）

Then you watch,as the ooze jiggles toward them.
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Then you watch, as the ooze jiggles toward them. （コンマ・ピリオドの後の余白）

To help I escape!
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To help me escape! （help 人~: 人が～するのを助ける）

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Introduce myself

I'm Naho Horiguchi. I'm in the 1st year at kumamoto university. And I major in education of music. I belong to volleyball and dance club. I'm going to performance the dance in school festival this November. I like music,but I also like sport.I have been playing the piano  since I was 5years old. And I belonged to basketball club when I was elementary school student and tennis club when I was junior high school and high school. I'd like to work as a music teacher in poor countries. I want to made people in the country happy by music. I think music makes the world peace. So I have to learn music and English harder. Also I want to visit some other countries.
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The exercises②

The exercises day2 2.1 The professor decided to take moral courage as the theme for his inaugural lecture.       The London underground map is best understood as a model showing how the different stations relate to one another rather than a precise representation of their distances from each other. 2.4 The study revealed a regular pattern of changes in temperature.
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The exercises③

~day 3~ 3.2 1. As can be seen from Table Ⅱ, participation figure have been steadily falling since 1970.      2. Different authors have account for the President's actions in different ways.      3. Mendel attempted to devise a system for classify the many different type of pea plant that he grew.     4. It is often most effective to present your data in chart or table.     5. The data we have collected show(s) that there has been a downward trend with regard to job satisfaction over the last 50 years.     6.The aim of the research is to develop a new software application which will help aviation engineers design more sophisticated aircraft.     7. The archaeologists should be able to use carbon dating techniques to establish exactly how old the bones are.     8. Charles Darwin attempted to explain the existence of different species in terms of evolution.
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